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Friday, April 1, 2011

A poem by Sophie


There was a little robin looking in my door ,
He then went and hopped around the cornor ,
He ate some nuts.
He joyfully said to  his friends
''oh look there's more bread on the shed''.
So he flew onto the shed and ate some more bread
and then he said ''whats this new thing i can see ''
He ate it and he liked it ,it was porridge oats hmmmmm .
And when he was finished he perched on a rock
Before flying away                                                                                                                                                               

                                       By Sophie Earls


  1. I think your'e poem is gorgeus i love the way its about the small litle robin.

  2. Lovely poem Sophie,
    You put in great personification for this cute robin.
    Keep up the great work,
    I love your poems.

  3. Good job Sophie and good work.

    From MoreBlessingxoxoxoxoxoxo