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Friday, April 1, 2011

A Poem from Lauren...

Birds poem

      Birds go here .
   Birds go there .
Birds are flying everywere.

In the sun.

In the wind .
Any weather..
Birds love air.

                                             by Lauren Murphy.


  1. very good poem lauren i like it.

  2. Lauren, your poem is really FABULOS - it rhymes it is short, so sweet,enjoyable and it tells a factual story through rhymning, and makes sense - my sister and I love this poem,Thank you for it on the blog,we love your poems so keep up the great work,Best Wishes
    Hannah K and Rachel K

  3. lauren your poem is great
    please put another 1 up.

    from temera