Lauren, your poem is really FABULOS - it rhymes it is short, so sweet,enjoyable and it tells a factual story through rhymning, and makes sense - my sister and I love this poem,Thank you for it on the blog,we love your poems so keep up the great work,Best Wishes Hannah K and Rachel K
very good poem lauren i like it.
ReplyDeleteLauren, your poem is really FABULOS - it rhymes it is short, so sweet,enjoyable and it tells a factual story through rhymning, and makes sense - my sister and I love this poem,Thank you for it on the blog,we love your poems so keep up the great work,Best Wishes
ReplyDeleteHannah K and Rachel K
lauren your poem is great
ReplyDeleteplease put another 1 up.
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